AHAP - ABC Team #7:
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Essay Draft (edits)
Final Essay: ABC7-Fre1
Wonpyo- Who wants to be leader? I can do it this time if you want... Or someone else can claim it. Sorry, it was me.
Jordan- Who wrote that above?
Jordan- okay so me and wonpyo will write the introduciton and james write the conclusion...and then we will talk about how we want to split up meat paragraphs
James- ok so maybe i'll write a body paragraph on the strike and riots of the time? how else should we split up the body paragraphs?
Wonpyo- I think they should go like this:
Success paragraph 1: AFL and Knights of Labor - how they both were successful (even though the kknights of labor disappeared, explain how it was successful during its time)
failure paragraph 1: i feel like we should have a paragraph on the carnegie system cuz thats kinda important, but it might be unbalanced?
failure paragrpah 2: the strikes and riots: haymarket, pullman, great railroad strike. NOT bread/roses because thats out of our time period. this might be a little big, so we could split it into 2, or let the person with failure paragraph 1 work on it too.
does this sound ok?
James said he'll do the strike and riots, he'll do some of the strike/riot paragraph? jordan and me we could split the other 2 up somehow it doesnt really matter to me
Wonpyo ill do the success paragraph i guess and you can do the carnegie system one and then we can let james the do striks riots and if we want we can just add on to his-Jordan
also write paragrpahs on like word and when finished then cut and paste instaed of being on the essay page the whole time which would allow us to not look at it..
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