AHAP - NOP Team #3:

• Sally B. (blue)
• Hannah M. (black)
• Alexandra S. (green) (leader)

Hey guys. before we do the intro and conclusion, we have to pick with topics we want to write about.. - alexandra

Definitely, also we should figure out whose doing which, if you have any ideas just write on my wall, if anyone is swamped with work or something then i could do the body paragraphs because i think they'd be the most time consuming. - sally

okay so I'm going to write out a rough draft for an introduction and conclusion on our common page. I don't know if because of the snowday the due date is still tonight, but I have work tomorrow anyway so I'm going to do it now. Then you guys can post any revisions you have to what I wrote. I think this is the best way to do it. -hannah

Sounds good! i just made so revisions to the intro - alexandra

Common Page

essay  <--- with color corrections

NOP3FRE<--- final black copy