AHAP - NOP Team #6:
Peer Edited Essay Copy Just a reminder that we have until Sunday at noon to revise and post the essay. Edits should be made on the peer edited copy- then I will post everything on the final essay page. Stephen and Dan- the body paragraphs need to be more relevant to the essay topic. You need to revise my paragraphs as well, so if you want to add something to the thesis, etc. go ahead. If you are unsure as to what the body paragraphs should be written about, just look back at the thesis the essay. Also, the conclusion needs to tie in with the overall ideas of the essays, it doesn't do this at the moment. I can help with that if you need/revise your new body paragraphs.
Ahap NOP Team 6 Final Essay Copy
Ahap NOP Team 6 common page
From Ms. P. ---> Daniel: Where is your contribution to the Part #3 assignment? Place it on the page linked below.
Part #3: Stephen and Melissa get 5 pts. ea.
I linked the intro and conclusion to the common page- im pretty sure that's where they are supposed to be
intro/conclusion:
http://aphistoria.pbwiki.com/STEPHEN-MELISSA-AND-DAN-NOP-INTRO-AND-CONCLUSION
...i wrote the conclusion... but of course i dont like it, its written without any intro....?
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